Dark Poetry #3 |
Reality... |
Rebelious Member
since 2001-05-27
Posts 57Kansas, USA |
Overwhelming my senses. Confuseing every thought. Your presence weakens me. For my end you have brought. Finding out the true answer, That hurt is caused by me. makes me want to puke! for a wussy I'll always be. I wonder if it would be easier, if I didn't have you.. to think and not feel.. what the hell would I do?!? Your mask is off! Your illusion waisted! My mind is free! [edit] what I taisted! You are fake in my eyes, but you played a big part. Ruined me forever. Begone my SORRY heart! [This message has been edited by Severn (edited 07-24-2001).] |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Rebelious - We've had discussions before about the guidelines in which I recommended you review them. I'd like to suggest the same now in regards to profanity. If you do so, you won't be inconvenienced again. Thanks for understanding. Severn |
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DarkenedShadow Member
since 2001-07-23
Posts 114Kansas |
Good I'm actualy the first one to look on this poem in a good way. NIce one you got here and I've checked some of your others out and I want to see alot more... /Nick/ |
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BitterSmoke Member
since 2001-01-02
Posts 54 |
I dig |
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Hellseyes Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 120Kansas, USA |
I feel you man...this is da [edit].../Drew/ [This message has been edited by Severn (edited 07-26-2001).] |
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