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Dark Poetry #3

Circle of Snakes

Dark Poet
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since 2001-07-22

Posts 99
North Carolina, USA

0 posted 2001-07-22 01:02 AM

Circle of Snakes
Copyright 2001
Written by James Edward Shields

Snakes kissing in the dead of night
Locked in passion
A forbidden thing
Coiling around one another
Deep inside
Up into the dark parts

Blanket of hearts entwined
Drowning in this sorcery
Of Desire
Bleeding out tears
The emotion inside
Of bondage untamed

Entombed release on velvet wings
Soul to soul
A murdered silence
Breathing as two are now one
Snake with
No beginning or end

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Dulcinea
Senior Member

since 2001-07-22

Posts 774
IN

1 posted 2001-07-22 11:55 AM

Dark, passionate, and loving as only you can write...nice. *S*

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2001-07-22 12:43 PM

bondage untamed

you are always so dark....... nice to see you here James...welcome
~soft smiles

~Wynter/Maureen

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

3 posted 2001-07-22 05:03 PM

Enjoyed this! excellent!

~Tier

DarkenedShadow
Member

since 2001-07-23

Posts 114
Kansas

4 posted 2001-07-23 03:57 PM

Ohh the darkness is added and the affect is put on. The snakes come out and show is here, hmm you are excellent. Keep it up. /Nick/

Dark Poet
Member

since 2001-07-22

Posts 99
North Carolina, USA

5 posted 2001-07-23 06:30 PM

Thank you for your comments and for reading my work.

James

Inanothertime
Member

since 2001-06-29

Posts 72

6 posted 2001-07-25 02:03 AM

very cool-smooth

BitterSmoke
Member

since 2001-01-02

Posts 54

7 posted 2001-07-25 03:10 AM

"Bleeding out tears"
-wonderful

Hellseyes
Member

since 2001-07-25

Posts 120
Kansas, USA

8 posted 2001-07-26 11:17 AM

eoe this is da [edit].../Drew/

[This message has been edited by Severn (edited 07-26-2001).]

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