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Scarlet Lady Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 242Midwest 
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Lay It All Down For You? What would you give for that? When your heart is double minded? Can a heart be divided and truly love? I wonder? How could it? Would you take my gift? Would it be precious? Or just another prize? Would life be different somehow? Or would it be clouded in the storm? Would you see my love as real? Or want more to fill the vanity? Does it make a difference at all? That I would lay it all down for you? I wonder? |
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Dark Kisses Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 364Flat lands of Kansas |
I have wondered it too. Every man I have ran acrossed has never taken me seriously. I have so much to give yet they only look at my outter beauty not the inner beauty. So sad  Good write, Mags Don't fear your tears! |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Would you see my love as real? Or want more to fill the vanity? Ahhh....you hit the nail on the head! Some are in relationships just for vanity's sake. Nice job! Marilyn |
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Hellseyes Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 120Kansas, USA |
undoubtly something we have all wondered about in our lives...good write../Drew/ |
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Jessica
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
Would life be different somehow? Or would it be clouded in the storm? Would you see my love as real? Or want more to fill the vanity? My favorite stanza...  Awesome write!! |
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WRBreezin Member
since 2001-08-04
Posts 212 |
Equally somber, and inviting...I enjoyed this one greatly. Willie |
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