Dark Poetry #3 |
Wretched |
wandering Member
since 2001-01-21
Posts 92 |
Wretched is the heart you've abandoned Left here to wallow in sorrow Dark is dreams void of light Without hope You've drained my love To leave my soul hollow A fragile shell Left to echoe in the shadows Where no sound is heard On ears deaf of passion lost in thought, found in words. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
I definitely love your ending. It's so strong yet bittersweet. The emotions that you have in this piece are very well conveyed. Well done on an excellent piece. ~AF~ GREMLINS ARE TRYING TO STEAL MY PANTS!!!!!!! *sobs* |
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destiny502 Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 57OH |
very painful writing. it reminds me of one of my favorite songs. Love can sometimes be like magic, but magic can sometimes..just be illusion |
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Inanothertime Member
since 2001-06-29
Posts 72 |
bad expirience, good stuff! thanks for sharing. |
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