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K2001 Junior Member
since 2001-01-19
Posts 31Near manchester in England |
Oh no...here we go... Struggle...fight...fall to the floor. Evil eyes deep and dead. Contamination fills my head. Chilling touch..... Hurts so much. This contant game of inner fear, how do i make it dissappear? Taking pleasure from my pain. Never stopping, always the same. Lye down. Go to sleep. Close my eyes. Count the sheep. Be a fairy in a far off land. Try to forget the touch of your hand. Warm beer breathe allover my face. Tears of silence...fear....disgrace. Stealing everything.Mind...Body....Soul. Gratification, your only goal. I dont matter, I dont count. I am not what this is about. Take me away. Take my life. Please i beg you friendly knife. Give me blood to make this right, Im too tired now to fight. Cut me deep. Release the bad. Take away the life ive had. "Keep the faith"-Jon Bon Jovi |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Keeley, your words cut so very deeply as I try to imagine how much pain you have been through, physically and mentally.........Sue Suetang |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
This is good too and i know what you mean. and how you feel but be careful what you say in passions there is a good chance that this may be locked because it alludes to suicide as an answer. but it was very good and i hope it doesnt get locked. |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Wow this is really powerful & gave me the shivers--i read all your poems so far & can really relate--I like your chioce of words but of course the message stings ~hugz~ LOVE ELMO <3 |
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