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K2001
Junior Member

since 2001-01-19

Posts 31
Near manchester in England

0 posted 2001-01-19 03:26 AM

His touches of evil,
the look on his face,
As he takes your life,
to a whole new place.

Secret encounters,
late at night.
His daunting touch,
you know its not right

Slipping under the cover,
to keep himself warm.
Feeling scared and alone,
this isnt the norm.

Lies and deceit.
You can NEVER tell.
Its your private secret,
your secret hell.

Listen to me,
Ill tell you no lies.
It will get harder,
the pain never dies.

It was NOT your fault,
Take my hand.
Tell me your horrors,
i do understand.

I know your pain.
I see your sorrow,
So i can promise you,
a whole new tommorow.

*K*

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

1 posted 2001-01-19 05:42 AM

Welcome to passions K...

It might be easy to respond to this with something comforting that could end up sounding rather trite.

Instead I will say that the flicker of hope at the end of this, and the knowledge of empathy, are the rays of light in the world that can help abuse victims carry on with their lives...

please check you email for a special welcome...

K

Strokes of ink, words, dreams like
Waking mountains make intimate conversations
With my shadow

From 'Words in the Night' by Jeff Geddes

Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member

since 2000-03-21

Posts 680
Kansas

2 posted 2001-01-19 08:48 AM

Welcome to Dark Passions. I liked this poem alot, it flowed along nicely. I hope you enjoy your stay here with us!

Mags

No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

3 posted 2001-01-19 08:56 AM

Yes K2001: the understanding you give in the end is ?? overwhelming, with an touch of love. It strikes home for me.

Joel.

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Verve
Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 348
Singapore

4 posted 2001-01-19 01:46 PM

WeLcoMe!!!

I gotta say this was a really good read. Very nice. I like.

Cheers.

Ginners
Member

since 2000-07-22

Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey

5 posted 2001-01-20 12:01 PM

I also think it would be easy to make a reply that would sound trite, however, i do feel touched by this piece. the hope, relief and understanding felt aat the end is a nice touch. Welcome to passions and enjoy yourself

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

6 posted 2001-01-22 01:04 PM

WOW..wonderfully written..

hugs, g

"i was thinkin'
if you were lonely
maybe we could leave here
and no one would know
at least not to the point where we would think so..."

ThyWizard
Member

since 2000-08-06

Posts 56
Chambersburg, PA, USA

7 posted 2001-01-23 08:28 AM

I agree, well written, the glimmer of hope was nicely played and the level of understanding was excellent. I enjoyed reading this one. And Welcome.

" If who i am is what i have and what i have is lost, then who am I? " - unknown

Tryps

AniKay83
Member

since 2000-06-28

Posts 388
Missing Since 1999

8 posted 2001-01-23 01:14 PM

I like this- it's like me, always full of hope...
welcome to passions

"Hearts will become practical when they make them unbreakable"
~The Wizard of Oz
Much love all,
Krissie

a_little_girl
Member

since 2000-05-08

Posts 307
San Alejandro, HI, USA

9 posted 2001-01-24 10:29 PM

Welcome to Passions. This is a great start, I hope to see more a lot more like this from you.

**No weapon will pierce my heart, no hand will be raised to harm me as long as I write.**
~a_little_girl

firejerm
Member

since 2000-06-13

Posts 217
Springfield, OH, good ol USA

10 posted 2001-01-25 01:32 AM

I think we've all been guilty of having late night rendezvous at one time or another in our lives. This is short and to the point, and I'm sure honest. I really enjoyed this.

Jerm

"Those little slices of death, how I loathe them."
-Edgar Allen Poe

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

11 posted 2001-07-09 06:55 PM

This piece of writing sent a chill through my spine. I can't imagine for a minute what it must be like to be abused and stripped of your innocence. Your words really affected me and I felt such sadness. I hope life is full of happiness for you now? Take care..Sue

Suetang

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