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Dark Kisses
Member

since 2001-06-24

Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas

0 posted 2001-06-29 12:33 PM

You play with my mind
My body, my soul
My heart has hardened
Turning black as coal
The confussion sets in
Tears start to flow
My mind goes blank
Self-esteem is low
Thinking of nothing
But the lies you say
Saying you love me
Yet you go away
Breathing becomes difficult
Pulse is too high
Eyes close shut
As I wonder why
Falling alseep
With a tear in my eye
Knowing tomorrow
The sun shall once again rise

Don't fear your tears!

Phreak
Junior Member

since 2001-04-11

Posts 26

1 posted 2001-07-01 11:21 AM

This is deep, and I can relate. I felt your pain as I read this and can only hope that true love finds its way to your heart :-) (False love seems so much easier to find, don't you think?)

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2001-07-02 01:47 AM

"Saying you love me yet you go away."
Does saying you love someone mean you have to spend lots of time with them, or do you desire to spend lots of time with someone you love...I would think so but I'm not sure...James

your_babydoll
Junior Member

since 2000-10-12

Posts 13
ohio

3 posted 2001-07-12 09:31 AM

im in a 'relationship' like this. he makes me believe i care, whether he means to or not, and then all of a sudden something bad happens. i get depressed until things are good again, which they usually are 'good' again eventually. its a pattern and it really sucks. maybe this will be the last cycle of the pattern. problem is, im not sure if i want it to be over with.

G. A. Webb
Member

since 2000-01-21

Posts 441
Stanton, California, USA

4 posted 2001-07-12 12:14 PM

You and I do seem to write coming from the same place. I really liked this one, as I do your others, and can totally relate to it. Great piece Mags! Keep'm com'n!

G

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

5 posted 2001-07-12 03:23 PM

wow i think u read my thoughts today & put them in a poem lol--My boyfriend of 2 years just stopped calling me last week for no reason & i can't get a hold of him--he lives 5 hours away so i have no idea whats going on

--your poem is excactly how i'm feeling--great work

LOVE ELMO <3

Ginners
Member

since 2000-07-22

Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey

6 posted 2001-07-12 08:02 PM

i did this cylce thing until like 4 months ago. if he is worth your love it will end eventaully. if not it is just a choice you need to make. great write

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

7 posted 2001-07-15 03:06 AM

Excellent, it was like reading my own thoughts.

"Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our
feet when our wings have trouble remembering how to fly." ~unknown

The Exile
Member

since 2001-07-14

Posts 52
Ontario, Canada

8 posted 2001-07-15 11:31 PM

Dark Kisses,

Good one! I especially liked the transation of feelings from the very begining "My heart has hardened, turning black as coal" to how you felt at the end "Knowing tomorrow, the sun shall once again rise". It's a process of growing up, a way towards understanding through accepting reality. Take care -

- Alex

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