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The Texture of Illicit
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The Texture of Illicit |
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Zyell Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 121USA |
sometimes, inappropriate is the right measure, sometimes there is a need to know...what if, you are my singular, an aqueous sway, tempting beneath fresh skin I move, arranged by your mouth touching soft exhilerating sighs don't leave, linger, this memory that lies sleeping in my red earth I should forget, but I can't not yet, I need the scent of fingerprints, the sensation providing comfort in a night when the climate is purifying, merciless Are you love? Are you a word ancient in abuses torturing the flow of blood Abuse, not with words or deeds with a fervor scraping the walls of the womb you are smoky lips and clandestine images dripping moist and rich the texture of illicit Life is an adventure to be experienced |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
God this is great, to the core of the womb. I love the imagery I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Superbly crafted in my opinion...lol - I don't give out superbs often... wow - this has quite blown me away.  K |
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howpeculiar Member
since 2000-12-12
Posts 56 |
FULL. The word edges my mind and barely stains it, but it seems the only description matching. Your images stray into dark, not with purpose, but because their diameter reaches out further than a single realm. You are not intimidated by the ordinary, and have used it to craft the spectacular. Be well. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
one of my favorites by you Zyell..looking forward to more..HUGS ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
this is by all accounts above, indeed an outstanding piece of poetry ... well done ... |
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Zyell Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 121USA |
joe the Wolf: you just don't know how much I appreciate the read and the kind words! thank you Severn: WOW, a Superb from someone like yourself, I am greatly honored, thank you! howpeculiar: intimidated by the ordinary, I DO like the way you arrange words, not ordinary in the least...thank you! Victoria: thank you sweetie, you know how much I appreciate you and your input! MA Miller: what else can I say... I am touched, thank you very much! *S* Life is an adventure to be experienced |
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