Dark Poetry #3 |
What is love? |
Rebelious Member
since 2001-05-27
Posts 57Kansas, USA |
Love is horrid, Love is bad. Love is delightful, Love is great. But for me its all the above. You see I thought I found the perfect mate. My love for her still remains. That is the bad because it tears me apart. I just wish these feeling would leave. Because it breaking my weakend heart. To faithum the idea of not haveing her, Is like thinking of a bullet to the head. I sometimes think she feels the same way, but I know its just my mind being missled. She said the words "I love you" and my heart started to race. I started to wonder can this be real? And i knew it was when she was in my embrace. Unfortunately I got hit with reality. I uncoverd her dark world, her dark mask. So now I sit here in darkness... And know I am not up for this task. Love is horrid, Love is bad. Love is delightful, Love is great. So now I ask what is love? It is a portal to your fate. |
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Dark Kisses Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 364Flat lands of Kansas |
WOW!! Excellent write my fellow kansan! This one hit too close to home for me. It seems you ripped my feelings straight from my darkened heart! Keep writing, Mags Don't fear your tears! |
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!!! Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 137VA (U.S.A) |
ill start by saying that this is a nice poem, and it really hits home with people who have suffered heratbreak. I'm starting to think that just about everyone has had their heart broken at least once in their life, and that maybe, it's how ya come back from it that makes you the person you are. or maybe not, I could be wrong... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed your thoughts about love...James |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Exceptional! Liked the meaning of it. may you live all the days of your life. -- jonathan swift |
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Hellseyes Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 120Kansas, USA |
this is da shkit...for real, for shizzle my nizzle, word to your mother.../Drew/ |
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Jessica
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
Very good... What don't kill you can only make you stronger... |
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