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My Heart Bleeds
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My Heart Bleeds |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
My heart bleeds blood bright red As echoes of the words you’ve said Reverberate through my distraught mind Leaving me emotionally in a bind My heart bleeds warm and wet With the weight of sheer regret I didn’t even get the chance To give more than a passing glance My heart bleeds in streams Where nothing is as it seems Like a river flowing out While inside I scream and shout My heart bleeds deep within While on your face you wear a grin Evil’s scent permeates the air Filling me with great despair My heart bleeds as it beats Silently my mind retreats Hiding in the shadow dark Praying that you’ll miss your mark My heart bleeds in buckets too Waiting to be destroyed by you It's no longer fight for life Succumbing to toil and strife My heart bleeds on and on Until the pain of you is gone Soaking in the anger’s grave Spilling the blood that you crave All writing comes by the grace of God. -Ralph Waldo Emerson [This message has been edited by Lone Wolf (edited 06-26-2001).] |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
Utterly dark ... Lovely. I like.  ~verve |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i REALLY liked this piece...dark indeed... yet written very well as i can relate to it ...great poem!...hope to see more...bye  im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes sometimes that pain lingers for a very long time...until we are ready and willing to let go...James |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~James is right,...and what he's said is something I myself should remember. Jenn,...this was truly a write filled with darkness and pain, in one sense I have to say that I don't like to see such hurt come from you, but in another, it's good because it's being released yes? Very well expressed, and you just keep on keeping, making your time the way the _you_ want it. *Peace gurly, sending sunshine. |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Your heart, my dear, bleeds when it breaks we hurt, we cry, we feel, we shake But blood holds life, it makes us live 'keeps our hearts warm so we can give Your heart holds not just blood alone you see, your heart is too, Loves' home And when we lose Love suddenly it leaves a hole that has to bleed A waste to us, or so it seems but when you're cut, blood keeps it clean And though it hurts, it only helps to cleanse of all the pain thats felt And as hearts heal they hum Loves' tune because they know they soon will bloom The scars are healed, no pain within wanting, needing Love again  Hope this encourages some babe  Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Wow! I have to admit this one supprised me at first. The pain lingers long, write it out, let it go, and find freedom in the release...take care my friend "Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Verve: I think it's good to take a walk in the dark every now and then. Thanks. Albert: Sorry you relate. It's pretty dark for me. Just helps to get it out sometimes. Best of luck to you. James: You are very wise my friend. SF: I know you don't like to see this side of me, no one does really, but sometimes you just have to get it out to let it go. I will keep on, always. You know that. Sunshine right back to ya! ThUnDeRkYsS: Thank you so much for the verse and encouragement sweetie. You're the best!  Eagle: Sorry to surprise you like that. I guess this was a new pain and I just had to let it go. Yes, there is much freedom to be found in release. So much. Thanks, Eddie. All writing comes |
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