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Dark Poetry #3

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Alysia182
Junior Member

since 2001-06-22

Posts 19
CT

0 posted 2001-06-23 07:28 PM

I don't really feel this way....but i wrote it while I was really depressed, so here it goes.

Lonleyness is my worst fear.
And here I am with nothing but tears.

I am in a room with 4 windows and 4 walls,
but no one anwsers when I call.

No one really cares,
This is too much for me to bare.

I have no best friends,
and no one calls me when the day ends.

There is no one to tuck me in at night,
And no one will even hug me tight.

A freak, is what they all call me.
And nothing is ever ment to be.

In my life, nothing lasts forever.
No one ever loves me, nope, not me...never!

Here i am with nothing but tears.
Lonleyness is my worst fear.

Somewhere over the rainbow, way up high....
There's a land that I heard of,
Once in a lullaby
Somewhere over the rainbow,
Skies are blue
And th

Dark Kisses
Member

since 2001-06-24

Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas

1 posted 2001-06-24 01:38 PM

Hey! I can really relate to this one. Boy oh Boy can I relate! You did a wonderful job here getting your feelings across.

Linc

Senior Member

since 2001-03-07

Posts 552
The Backstreet Boy

2 posted 2001-06-28 08:41 PM

Hey,

Well I though I had a best friend but that person never calls me...hrm

-- Linc

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taramw
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 738

3 posted 2001-06-29 04:57 AM

I liked this poem... I reckon a lot of people can relate to certain aspects of it

And a person can only perhaps write it this well when you feel certain aspects of it yourself... well done

Take care.

may you live all the days of your life. -- jonathan swift

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