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Lost in a Fantasy |
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LadyPeach1 Member
since 2001-06-04
Posts 282 |
Dreams of chasing a fantasy, that would never come true, trying to keep the thoughts out of my head, I try not to think of you, I love you so much I could die, But that you do not see, How much I love you, more than anyone, I wish you just loved me, Captured in your presence, When you walk into the room, Trying to keep from crying, Because my heart is filled with gloom, I keep wondering why you don't like me, I wonder why you won't give me a try, I just wish you would say hi to me, Cause one day I might say bye, I know you probably won't miss me, I know you probably don't care, But I love you more than anyone, And for you my love I would share, I never loved anyone as much as you, for you are the fire of my heart, But when you call me names, and shun me away, It rips my heart apart, I will wait forever for that day, When you say you care, Then I will take your hand and hold it tight, And our love we could share, Please just love me, Please just see, Don't you know, How much I love you so, You will never know, But I guess you won't love me, And you never will see, I think I am lost in a fantasy.... [This message has been edited by LadyPeach1 (edited 06-19-2001).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Perhaps a desperate fantasy...James |
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LadyPeach1 Member
since 2001-06-04
Posts 282 |
James, thanks for your reply, even thought I actually took it kind of, Oh, I would say offensively! I really like my work, and I enjoy feedback, but I have never had anything as close as being negative as yours was. Actually almost every poem on this site that I have posted is not based on a true life experiance that has happened in MY life, I am 14 years old, trust me, I don't go through that much just yet! My time will come. But I actually write on alot of stuff I see happen between my family and friends, and just stuff I see in this world just IN GENERAL. But if it was not mean't to be a negative feedback I am sorry. Thanks!! LadyPeach1 |
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Dark Kisses Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 364Flat lands of Kansas |
Awwwwww, I liked your fantasy! I too have lived in one sorta like this. Keep up the faith and your hopes! Mags Don't fear your tears! |
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