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Dark Poetry #3

I hate Guys

DJLI
Member

since 2000-06-21

Posts 237
TN, USA

0 posted 2001-06-12 11:17 AM

After alot of mixed signals from a guy, I came out with this. Its from a guys point of view(in my opinion)

I thought I really wanted you,
I thought I might actually care.
But I think not of your kindness,
nor of your soft, sweet smelling hair.

I think more of what I can have,
of what your willing to give away.
And it doesn't bother me at all,
if I don't see you for a few days.

I care not for your humor,
or for your quite reguard.
And I care not for your affection,
I care only if you make things hard.

I thought you would understand,
I thought you knew how it would be.
You're just not the right person,
To want to be with me.

P.L.U.R.
Peace - Love - Unity - Respect

Linc

Senior Member

since 2001-03-07

Posts 552
The Backstreet Boy

1 posted 2001-06-12 06:46 PM

Hey,

Thats brutal, my being a guy would never do that to a girl! Its mean, hurtful, sudistic, and something else I can't put my finger on yet but I will think of something. It's a really good poem. Until your next poem

-- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

TheGreatMango
Junior Member

since 2001-06-12

Posts 17
Louisana, USA

2 posted 2001-06-12 07:13 PM

hmmmmm its a pretty good poem i think i am still not SUre how to critise someone else good or bad cuz well i dunno.. I do feel it was a very touching piece of work.. and i am already looking for more of your work just after postinh this

the_rescue
Member

since 2001-05-23

Posts 316
Japan

3 posted 2001-06-13 09:41 AM

that's a really cool poem I like it a lot it flowed well and such good job

The Rescue

in the silence of the night I hear angels voices singing your name oh how beautiful is your name as they sing over and over. (SPOKEN)

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