Dark Poetry #3 |
A thought |
Shadowdean Junior Member
since 2001-06-11
Posts 11Silver Spring, MD |
Noon turns to dark feeding time in inner city parks Faite gave my soul a heavy weight thats carried on my heart Holding bloody knifes before heaven's gate screaming out "let me, forgive my sins, actions burning let your love clense my skin" Blessed with good soul that rotted with a hole. Misdirected through life but always respected I'm muddy cause I do my work in the dirt and mud Shedding blood when I really want to spread love A vessle possed by the rage of demon I know the truth is in front of me, but I'm not seein' My reality is just grays and black Fists, gunfights, and corner crack. But I'm on this path and there's no turning back. Just another day to my struggle, rebellion on my lips but the instution got me in a muzzle. |
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allis4angel Member
since 2001-04-10
Posts 82Portugal |
" Just another day to my struggle, rebellion on my lips but the instution got me in a muzzle " Nice first post. What an end! Congratulations. Keep posting |
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FoxXena Member
since 2001-06-13
Posts 141where dragons play, children run free and foxes are never hunted |
Well, this is really bleak...a real Modernist theme. It really reflects a dark world here. Would you be known by everybody? Then you know nobody. |
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LadyPeach1 Member
since 2001-06-04
Posts 282 |
That was a really really great first post! You did an excellent job. Wonderful poem! LadyPeach1 |
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Shadowdean Junior Member
since 2001-06-11
Posts 11Silver Spring, MD |
Thank you so much for your kind words! I really appreciate it. "Victory can be anticipated, but not assured" |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Wow.. really great first post. These are very deep thoughts. Much enjoyed. Welcome --Marie You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds. |
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baerlon Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 197Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA |
i look forward to reading more of your work There's a peace inside us all |
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