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xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

0 posted 2001-06-05 11:06 PM

Hey guys! I posted this a while ago in the Teen Forum and i just brought it up and wanted to see what you guys thought of it! So here ya go

I would do anything for you,
To make you see a brighter day.
I'd do the impossible,
Just to take all your pain away.
I've been there alone,
By your side through it all.
I was the one dedicated to lift u from darkness,
If you happened to slip and fall.
I love u with all my heart,
I'll never love another in this way.
No matter what shall happen between us,
Forever implanted in my heart you will stay.
Im the one your meant to be with,
And soon this for yourself you will see.
We're meant to be together,
But just not right now is what kills me.

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

1 posted 2001-06-06 12:41 PM

very emotional poem here...i liked how you expressed it...and i hope everything turns out the best for you michele

...bye

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

little_krazy_poet
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since 2001-05-28

Posts 41

2 posted 2001-06-06 01:37 AM

hellow it's me from teen, but i have to say i read a lot in here but just never answered anything but any way i realy like this poem

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2001-06-06 07:08 AM

Thanks guys!!!! LOL Crazy i feel all special now that you dont reply to any poems in here but u chose to reply to mine

Hehehe...N e wayz thanks a lot for replyin guys!!!

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

4 posted 2001-06-06 07:34 AM

ShUgArHiGh,
passionate poem, I like the way you put it together.
Write on
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

LadyPeach1
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since 2001-06-04

Posts 282

5 posted 2001-06-06 11:17 AM

Hey Shugar!!
I love this poem, it was absolutely BEAUTIFUL! I really really liked it alot!!
That is a wonderful poem!

Keep up the good work!

LadyPeach1

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

6 posted 2001-06-06 01:57 PM

Thanks everyone!!

angelbear
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since 2001-05-22

Posts 139
North East, USA

7 posted 2001-06-06 02:40 PM

I love this poem too. Sweet..or bitter sweet. Great job!

I can't control
my destiny
I trust my soul,
my only goal
is just to "be"
-Lyrics from RENT

kansas-jim
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since 2001-06-05

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Willits,Ca

8 posted 2001-06-06 05:07 PM

Very nice, I am living this piece right now. Thanks for sharing.

BitterSmoke
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since 2001-01-02

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9 posted 2001-06-06 07:30 PM

I like the "honesty" of this write.
Whats amazing to me is the human capacity to seek the quaintness of love for all of its hope...then turn around and blast love as a farce. Reminds me ironicaly (even though not the same subject) of michelle ma belle by the beatles and thus perhaps the side of love I should be paying more attention too.

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