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WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
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somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-11-06 10:18 PM


Sometimes I don't want to be so sweet
I want to rant, rave and scream
pull down the walls and just let go
to being kind, to just say no.

I'd like to tear into a few
slap around this one, or two
really get down and quite dirty
to hell with being so darn flirty.

I think perhaps would make me feel
more alive, more like the real
people who populate my space
once in a while to spit in face
of the nasty smelly little trolls
who often I have found quite droll.
But alas this Rose is too kind
to do this to any of mankind
but just once, I'd really like
to tell them all, "go take a hike".

Releasing anger and some angst
good at this I really ain't,
but it was needed just now I guess
and if felt good I must confess.

DarkRose

[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (11-06-2002 10:19 PM).]

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leafseranade
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since 2001-07-06
Posts 118
Wisconsin, USA
1 posted 2002-11-09 08:44 PM


I can relate very much to this!  I've often felt like giving the mean souls a taste of their own medicine, but you know, I think some are so caught up in their pain, they wouldn't notice a kind heart doing damage...but we are the ones that would really feel bad.  But I think it's necessary to express that anger in healthy ways like through..poetry!   
WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
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somebody's dungeon
2 posted 2002-11-09 10:44 PM


leafserenade, sometimes we just gotta let it out huh? Though, just in poetry.
Dark Kisses
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since 2001-06-24
Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas
3 posted 2002-11-11 09:30 PM


Yep, I know this all TOO well.  I liked the way you expressed it in this poem.  It flowed very nicely!!  

A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness.

majnu
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since 2002-10-13
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4 posted 2002-11-11 10:33 PM


and you my dear are entitled whenever you feel it.

a nice rant.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

Stryder
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since 2002-06-22
Posts 29
Silent Hill
5 posted 2002-11-11 10:43 PM


I can relate to what you're saying in this poem, when I have a bad day, sometimes I feel like tearing down a wall.

"Two wrongs don't make a right,
but three rights make a left."

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