Dark Poetry #3 |
Not So Perfect Me! |
qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
NOT SO PERFECT ME I am a Perfectionist. You may not see. But everything I do, is never good enough to me. I am a failure, in this place. Bittersweet, is all I taste. My glass's always half empty, never full, always the negative, this I know. Too much thinking, second guessing. Over & over, always messing. No matter how many times, it's never done. I'm never satisfied, so I give up & run. If it's not spur of the moment, then thoughts will flow. I'll hide my feelings. I will not go. Don't want to be a burden, don't want others to grin, because of all that's not perfect, inside me, within! So I sit up all night, rarely sleep. I question my whole life, & then I weep. Do they just pretend to care? Feel sorry for me? Am I blind to the truth? Why can't I see? Please help me trust! Please help me be! Please let me rest! Please comfort me! ~Confusion controls my life!~ ~And all is perfect in the land of make-believe!~ HEE HEE! LOVE ELMO <3 |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
this poetry relates to me. You are me. Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.) |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
I read it again and each word realtes to me. I think I might be you times 2. Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.) |
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angelbear Member
since 2001-05-22
Posts 139North East, USA |
Elmo...This is me too. There may be many of us out there. I relate very much to what you say here and you say it very well! (sometimes Prozac helps....just kidding of course...) I can't control |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
LOL--Thanx every1--There might be a lil of this in all of us huh--Well i'm glad u liked it--Now i know y I come here, because no matter how dark it is I'm never alone THANX again--LOVE ELMO <3 Elmo Luvs You-Hee Hee! |
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