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Another Night's Fade
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Another Night's Fade |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Another Night's Fade Within the darkness, the gloom from the evenings myst dampens my spirit, as reality sets in and the mind crawlers begin their search, leaving a residue of fear, for me to snack upon. Thoughts, images, shadowing me, creating the walls that keep me from your touch... Possessed, aching for the blending and unfolding of time, seeking that oneness to embrace me, yet provide a barrier for night thoughts of you to rest upon my heart... I frame you in my dreams, the wantings consuming me: to hold your face in my mind, allow my lips to caress yours, urging me to yield unto you... As I fade into the night's journey, darkness hides the pieces missing from my life, binding me in silence, reigning my past to the fore, suspending me, depths within my depths, as the shades of the night are pulled and I await the new day to peek through and rise me to another level. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 05-25-2001).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
nicely done wynter..as always..HUGS  glad i peeked in~Victoria~
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
I can definitely relate to this! Well done! ~Tier |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
well written...i liekd it i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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angelbear Member
since 2001-05-22
Posts 139North East, USA |
Well done..wonderful words. Sad but so moving.  I can't control |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I love this! well done my friend! and don't worry about the title thing (you worry too much  ) Beautiful, evocative writing here! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
~V~ thanks *s always a pleasure to see you here M Tiersdin, glad you could relate ~Smiles, although I hope it is with the warmth of it. aa, thank you for stopping by..it sure is easy to be addicted to words isn't it...~smiles ~Wynter angelbear, within my sadness I am happy...just not contented yet. Thank you serenity..Thanks, you're a dear...sometimes I don't pay attention to when I am posting..but I guess many of us think along the same lines... ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Wynter, simply superb, especially this: "darkness hides the pieces missing from my life, binding me in silence" Write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Excellent work! "Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Excellent!!! Great job and beautifully written |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Kethry ..."darkness hides the pieces missing from my life, binding me in silence"...still does...probably always will..thank you Kethry huggss for always listening to my aches and pains EagleOne ..I am pleased you enjoyed my words xShUgArHiGhx ..thank you very much ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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