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Oh How I Long |
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Snowdwen Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 75Louisiana 
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A pirfit fit would to at last hold you close in my arms so.. close our hearts beating as one.. music to my heart the sun sets to yet a first purrfict day we hold one another in a love's embrace.. no longer we wate.. but so close.. yet far away.. no longer to we long.. but dream of that day.. The sun is gone.. now we rest.. A new day begins.. Was it all a dream.... No your there laying beside me Sleeping soundly.. a buety in its own. I once again take you in my arms.. To awaken you for the start of dawn. [This message has been edited by Snowdwen (edited 05-24-2001).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
just trying to clean up your spelling and phrasing.. A perfect fit would be to at last hold you close in my arms so close our hearts beat as one.. music to my heart The sun sets to yet a first perfect day We hold one another in love's embrace.. no longer to wait.. so close, yet far away.. No longer do we long.. but dream of that day.. The sun is gone.. now we rest.. A new day begins.. Was it all a dream? No... You're there, laying beside me Sleeping soundly, a beauty in it's own. I once again, take you in my arms.. To awaken you for the start of dawn. I just corrected spelling and a few words..I am not sure it is what you meant butI tried *s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Snowdwen Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 75Louisiana |
Wynter, thanks for the help with the spelling. |
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