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tac Junior Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 28New Jersey |
If I could go away Do something to take you out of my mind Everytime I close my eyes.. There you are! Love of my life Lost you twice! Wish I could die see the other side perhaps you'll be there maybe I should cry nothing left to hide the way I feel inside All I feel is pain walking in the rain will I go insane nothing feels the same [This message has been edited by tac (edited 05-23-2001).] |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
weird title, but nice poetry. I especially found the following lines interesting. ____________________ Wish I could die see the other side perhaps you'll be there ___________________________ Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.) |
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BitterSmoke Member
since 2001-01-02
Posts 54 |
Yes, that love of once life....yes. The patterns I like, the content I relate to, I like it -BitterSmoke |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
I, too, like that phrase, and I like the building of momentum through the write, as if the feelings just came gushing out as you wrote it. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. |
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