Dark Poetry #3 |
Death of Shadows |
Lonely Shadow Member
since 2000-03-14
Posts 128Virginia |
Lonely Shadow, after discussion in the moderator forum it's been decided that your poem breaches our guidelines concerning poetry that offers suicide as a viable option. If you need to refresh your knowledge of our guidelines the link is below: /pip/guidelines/rules.html#Suicide If you have any questions please feel free to email Severn |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
I read this more as script, imagining the author penning his world down on paper, the darkness, anger and fears. I want more, wanting to keep reading at what this subject sees, hears, feels, how these tauntings are transforming his outlook on life and how he will carry on or fail. Thinking of making this a multiple piece? Would be great to read. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. |
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