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The Raven |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
To feel the coldness, chill of ice, Skinless bones, falling thrice, To see the agony all balled up, Emptiness beneath the hidden glare, To dance to silence, empty arms, Twirled around to vicious storms, To hear the raven flabbing wings, Eyes black, jaded nearer in my dream, Blackness of the hidden room, Sounds bombard this endless gloom, echoes strike my heart takes beat, To feel the hotness from the heat, Eyes open hollow, hold on tight, For soon the blackness seems so right, Soon the light settles in, And all is left to me again. The raven takes flight once more. [This message has been edited by Rosebud1229 (edited 05-07-2001).] |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
I love the flow in this! Great job! ~*Freedom Is Not Free*~ (Korean War Memorial) |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Enjoyed! ~Tier |
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sgreybe Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 209London, UK |
This is really great my friend, I have been in similar situations... I enjoyed it a lot, keep it up Sylvia |
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