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Temptress*Moon Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 240Long Island, NY |
Through the Dark of the night, The Chill through the air You will feel me race through You like a fire, Burning through You're blood Surrounding you, enveloping you're Mind, body, and Soul Submission is what you give Together We become one Taking your last breath You're Last glimpse of free life Focusing on US Together living in Sin Forever YOU will be Mine "Control" is the power that i Seek Chaining you to my love Submitting yourself to me Worship the presence before YOU It's ONLY you and I Serve me as needed For i am the Only one forever in You're eyes< !signature--> I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH- [This message has been edited by Temptress*Moon (edited 01-17-2001).] |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
very interesting very good, i am not sure what this is saying or trying to get across really, but i know i like the words and the way they fit |
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Temptress*Moon Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 240Long Island, NY |
Thanks Gin, It's about a Mistress/Master and her slave, I guess people really wouldn't understand it...unless they were familar with the BDSM lifestyle...But thanks for the kind words... I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH- |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
This rocks man !!! HM ... reminds me a lot of femdom. oh well. :P cheers. |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Darkly seductive! Like a death dance, to another's eyes, the throes of the victim appear to be a lover's dance, yet Death is stealing his soul. Well written. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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