Dark Poetry #3 |
I Fear the doll (repost from open 11) |
OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
I Fear the doll In the corner of my room, There is a line twixt light and gloom, And perched in velvet finery, Mary Anne, she waits for me, Watching, watching glassy eyes, Never sleeping, open wide, I peek at her from in my bed, Her blood red lips and ivory head, Biding time 'til I can keep, No longer from a fitful sleep, For if I slumber, then I'm sure, From darkness 'cross my bedroom floor, The pitter pat of tiny feet, Those china hands upon my sheet, She'll claw and scrape until she stands, My heaving throat within her hands, Then crush the very life from me, There's no escape from such as she, So here I cower at midnights toll, I dare not sleep, I fear the doll. Olias |
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Swamp¤Faeryie Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 393fairyland....of course;) |
interesting..........i like the style you've written it in...very very interesting. sam much madness is divinest sense,and much sense the starkest madness~Emily Dickinson |
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Blaec Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 130The Sunshine State |
I really enjoyed this. I'll never look at a china doll the same again! |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
preety scary tale. You have a mind like mine. Thanks for the great work. Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.) |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Swampfaeryie, Thank you for your kind reply I'm glad you liked. Blaec, Oops, now I've done it you have the same phobia as me, thanks for your reply. Xeonox, Your very kind, I'm also uneasy about clown dolls, but thats another story (lol) Regards to you all, Olias. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Scary..it really is lol.. scary scary scary... K |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Thanks Servern, not sure your talking about me or the poem, probably both scary scary scary lol. Regards, Olias. |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Olias, this is excellent paranoia. I really liked it. Missed this somehow, but I just can't read everything. lol "The rose, like the cactus flower, protects herself with thorns. We however, impale ourselves on their beauty." |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Reminds me of the clown in the Poltergeist movie. Scary when our imagination runs away from us!! Well done *War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!* |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Coyote, Thanks for the read, I know how you feel its hard to keep up. Isis, Yep, I dont like the clown thing either, not much hope for me. Thanks for your kind words. Regards to you both Olias. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
(it reminded me of Chucky) |
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