Dark Poetry #3 |
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hiding in a dark room |
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420timebong New Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 3Canada |
hiding in A Dark Room You open doors, and i close them. Once in awhile i peek my head out to see if your still there. Inside my room is dark. I sit there alone and feel i need noone, no love. I never needed it before. So Can i leave you today? No, i never want to. but i let you think otherwise almost everyday. How should i show my love to you? i have not a clue. i just give up, and go back to feeling blue. I close more doors than i open, but i hope you will stay. because i never leave the door closed forever. One day i will let the door open, and together we can play. and my loneliness will forever go away.. (this is my first poem since i just got into poetry.) ''The words you say never seem to live up to the ones inside your head.'' Chris Cornell |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family. I enjoyed this, your first poem! Feel free to read and reply...ask questions if you want. We're here to help. Please check your email! |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Welcome to our online home... ![]() ![]() |
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Xeonox![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
To me it seems that the speaker seems afariad of being ina a realtionship and wants the other person to be patience. IF I am reading wrong, forgive me and Welcome to Passions. Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.) |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I'd like to add my welcome also! "Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Welcome to passions and I enjoyed your first offering very much, written with much depth of emotion I hope to read more. Regards Olias. |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
This was very good for your first poem. welcome to passions i am looking forward to reading more. "I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN |
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