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love is fictional, at least, mine is... |
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coma_dream New Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 6 |
Fictional Peace and releaf, as you fall down Keep getting deeper, fail to make a sound Try to realise, it’s just another dream We’re only fictional, you and me I guess you’re just, longing for pain As fake as it will be, you live another day Try to float, you see it’s another dream You’re only fictional, you’ll see I’m too buy (aren’t we just perfect ?) I’m too buy (as perfect as we can be) I’m too buy (aren’t we too perfect ?) I am only fictional (if you just could see...) Take this shape, to fit in what you are You spread through my body, getting too far Try to breathe, you try to escape the dream I suffocate you, the fiction is not what it seems I’m too buy (aren’t we just perfect ?) I’m too buy (as perfect as we can be) I’m too buy (aren’t we too perfect ?) I am only fictional (if you just could see...) I’m too buy (I’d wish we were perfect) I’m too buy (as perfect as we can be) I’m too buy (we can never be too perfect) I am only fictional (if we just could see...) That I’m dying... |
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Dedreia Member
since 2000-07-10
Posts 172Kokomo, Indiana, United States |
Great first post!! Welcome to this wonderful place...I have been away for a while, but it feels good to be home. Thanks for your nice words about my poem as well. Looking forward to the next one! Dee  "It doesn't matter who you love, or how you love, but that you love" Rod McKuen |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! I think you'll find we are very friendly. I look forward to reading more from you. Please check your email!  |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Welcome to Passions... hope you find this a wonderful place to be...  K |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
I enjoyed this post. It is a new style of writing that I have seen. Great work. Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.) |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
"Take this shape, to fit in what you are You spread through my body, getting too far Try to breathe, you try to escape the dream I suffocate you, the fiction is not what it seems" Welcome! I too liked the style of this one. I enjoyed the read, take care! "Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
I like this very much, a refreshing style, welcome to passions and thank you for sharing this. Regards, Olias. |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
This was a great write, welcome to passions.  "I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN |
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