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The Taste of Sin
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The Taste of Sin |
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xEmperorEmber Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 136tx |
oh the way she holds me tight in accordance with the intentions of the mind griping my bare weak body with her cold hands the bony hands which trap the stark remains of a depleted soul a decision made by the conscious thought and shunned by heart the choice to know what lies beyond my capacity making the wrong decision when fully aware of the right one clearly drawn before blind eyes my mind not once taking heed to all the lost faces in the crowd who beg me to spare myself i yet again make the wrong decision i grasp the innocence which is now being portrayed just beyond the thin layer of the fruit she holds before me the taste of the world and all her pleasure just beyond that first layer of delicate sin which taunts the driving need for satisfaction i turn my eyes from the things i hold close and devour the fruit of eden i am not the first and others will follow and my debt to her is paid by the pain i suffer which comes as a direct result of her wisdom which is so graciously given to me i take upon myself to willingly perform the sins that lead to the gradual extinction of my innocence all for the glance of the sacred flesh of temptation that lines the fruit whose taste i can never remember, and that of which i ask for in a greedy fit of redundancy the gaze i cast upon it is a selfish one full of lust and the fire that tends to burn within me assures me once more at the arrival of a new day that it is my right to forsake everything and exchange it all for nothing 1000 steps forward with no way to go back home [This message has been edited by xEmperorEmber (edited 04-24-2001).] |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Great work. I found the following line interesting. i grasp the innocence which is now being portrayed just beyond the thin layer of the fruit she holds before me Again, great work. Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.) |
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Dedreia Member
since 2000-07-10
Posts 172Kokomo, Indiana, United States |
I like this very much.  "It doesn't matter who you love, or how you love, but that you love" Rod McKuen |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
This was an interesting subject. Very good. *~*Amanda*~* |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Well hello stranger... ....interesting indeed. Delicious too... Open your eyes. "...if you want love you must be love.." Billy Corgan, Smashing Pumpkins [This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (edited 05-21-2001).] |
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xEmperorEmber Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 136tx |
thanks |
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