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My Age of Reason
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My Age of Reason |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland 
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The first horseman came, And brought a miracle to my life, Found me adoptive parents, Hence he saved me from strife. The second horseman came, Bringing with him love, A pleasure I was immersed in, My gift from above. The third horseman came, And he brought forth my gifts, Lending promise to my life, Ways to fill those rifts. The fourth horseman came, Bringing with him jealousy and distrust, Showing me that not all people are true, That all too soon their hopes and lives will rust. The fifth horseman came, And he showed me my compassion, That I'm to be a carer, To fill this void with love and emotion. The sixth rider came forth, And taught me how to blend all, Hence the dawning of my Age of Reason, The strength and the knowledge, the courage not to fall. My Age of Reason, Always dawns anew, Brings me love, friendship and comfort, Rewards for the good I do.... *War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!* |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Aye, the "excuses" of youth replaced by our age of "reason". And what might the seventh horseman bring? Perchance the power to see beyond the vail? Great read, as usual. Isis.  "I hate quotes, they suck!" |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
that 7th horseman can only be bringing enlightenment my kindred. . . wonderful poem. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Isis You painted such a wonderful picture of hope in your writing and it was so obvious it came from a loving soul. Thank you....Sue Suetang |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Very beautiful poem. You have a way with words... you're a talented writer. I enjoy reading your work, and this one really touched me. Nice work! --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks friends glad you enjoyed it! Sven knows me to well, I hope the 7th rider will bring the sought after enlightenment  Spot on hon!!Isis *War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!* |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
enlightment, is my wish for your seventh horseman too. I like the title to this, based on the seven ages of man perhaps? |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
I like this poem it tells the beautys of life, its very imaginative ansd it put a smile on my face, I really enjoyed it. ^*~Kicking Kim~*^ "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
Something about this one really hit me. You are really talented. I look forward to more of your poetry. *If the only place I can live my dreams is in my sleep, then I'll sleep forever!* |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks Kicking Kim and Heaven's Tears *War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!* |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Excellent writing...James |
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