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Yours, Truly |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
I've got your number & I've got hers too I've called you before & you know it's true anytime, anyplace when you're unaware I could suddenly call on a whim or a dare I could bring up things that you'd rather forget or destroy your affair with her on on a bet or remind you how once you used to be mine that I used to be your sweet valentine I could call up your friends & harass them like hell perhaps get you fired from your job as well remember that next time you treat me a fool I've got your number & I've got hers too... -Tier There's absolutely no truth in this poem whatsoever! *chuckles* |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
The truth can indeed be a woman, but I'd hope you wouldn't actually do anything. The knowledge of the truth you possess should be enough... Isis *War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!* |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This reminds me of the time I got ahold of my ex wife's boyfriend's number in Argentina and I was trying to call him and it suddenly dawned on me that I would rather not stand in the way of her search for happiness...James |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
OUCH! Effectivly communicated possible revenge mode here. I like it.  still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
Wow I love the tone in this poem, the language used is amazing and the imagery given off is so vivid. I loved it so keep up the good work!! ^*~Kicking Kim~*^ "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
Well there may be no truth in this for you, but for me there is. I had his number and i had hers too. and her address, i actually spent so many nights sitting across the street watching them. well anyway too much info. this poem brought back bad memories, but that isnt a bad thing, i enjoyed reading this  "I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN |
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Blaec Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 130The Sunshine State |
I love this. I always love the possibility of revenge. Great poem! |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
A very powerful write, well done, technology can become almost terrifying in the wrong hands, I have an airhorn by my phone for just such an occasion, I enjoyed thank you. Regards, Olias. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you, everyone, for reading and commenting on this poem. It just more or less wrote itself and I never expected to get much attention. Thank you again... *smiles* -Tier |
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Topheth Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 297Texas |
Very nice, Tier, very. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you, Topheth, nice of you to say! *smiles* ~tier |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
how did I miss this one Tier??? great job my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Wow--very harsh, but good--I like  LOVE ELMO |
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