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Dark Poetry #3

A world unknown

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2001-04-11 01:53 AM

I sit here thinking
Do these people really like me?
We share a dose of laughter
And a dose of remorse,
I do not feel quite happy
Like when I am alone,
I make do with what I get,
Not asking for much more,
A simple hello,
A simple smile,
That does it all,
But in the end I am the one
That is left feeling confused.
For when I go in their world,
To them I feel unknown.

Ronil (Inspiration for my poems is all around me for my muse is my reality.)

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2001-04-11 03:08 AM

Hope you find a person or a place where you feel comfortable...James

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

2 posted 2001-04-12 03:05 AM

Thanks for the reponse.

Ronil (Inspiration for my poems is all around me for my muse is my reality.)

coyote
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

3 posted 2001-04-12 09:20 PM

"Not asking for much more,
A simple hello,
A simple smile,"

True feelings.
The human condition.

"I hate quotes, they suck!"
I.G. Norance

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

4 posted 2001-04-13 12:48 PM

Xeonox,
you've painted a truth here. I think we are all looking for a place to belong.
Write on
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

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