Dark Poetry #3 |
Darkside |
robin-shep Junior Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 28northern California, USA |
Hi Robert. Under PIP's copyright laws, posting another's poem isn't permitted. Please read the email I sent you which explains this in more depth. Thanks for your understanding.. Severn |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Charles, powerful poem but a couple of small errors , you spell embrace just so and enternal should be spelt without the first "n" otherwise a good poem. write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
I found this a wonderful morning read!! I have been away for some time now and this is the first poem that I picked to read.....reminded me just how much I miss the darkness here. Until...ali "There is an alter ego which |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Charles is very talented. It is a very expressive poem...short and sweet...perfect =o) |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
nice job on this.thanks for the great read..keep writing |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
"At the shoulder of demons I cry" This is a great line because it shows 2 meanings, fear and comfort. The fear is of the demns and this is the reason you cry but it explains how he feels comfort with them because he cries on their shoulder. This is an excellent poem and its a real eye opener! Truly appreciative ^*~Kicking Kim~*^ |
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