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Dark Poetry #3

Destination Unknown

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2001-03-31 04:22 PM

Destination Unknown

A pulsating mobile object is hurling thru time and space
unaware of a destination and feeling out of place.
An explosion is imminent or a collision might occur.
Anything is possible and everything is sure.
I have experienced an earthquake and a bright orange lava flow.
Perhaps a tsunami will take out Hawaii as a hot forest fire burns wildly out of control.
I knew this object well til she ripped it from my chest
or did I freely give it to her thinking my heart knew what was best.
Now the center of my universe has left me all alone
to go haphazardly hurling thru time and space
with a destination unknown.

Jameslee@March31,2001

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2001-03-31 05:44 PM

James,
well written.
Write on
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

mirror man
Senior Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 814

2 posted 2001-04-01 01:56 AM

Interesting image. Good work.

mc
Member

since 1999-11-16

Posts 67
México

3 posted 2001-04-01 03:36 AM

Destination unknown... don't we all feel like that at least once in life? There's always a meaning to it all just be patient and enjoy the ride.
I liked it!!!

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

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Mobile, AL