Dark Poetry #3 |
Thoughts |
G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
Thoughts can be short And thoughts can be long Thoughts can be weak And thoughts can be strong Thoughts can be anything You want them to be Thoughts can be you And thoughts can be me Thoughts can be hot And thoughts can be cold Thoughts can be bought And thoughts can be sold Thoughts can be shared With the whole world for free Thoughts can be you And thoughts can be me Thoughts can be clear And thoughts can be vague Thoughts can spread fear Like a new modern plague Thoughts can be all That your mind's eye can see Thoughts can be you And thoughts can be me Thoughts can be day And thoughts can be night Thoughts can be darkness And thoughts can be light Thoughts can be all Of the love I've for thee Thoughts can be you And thoughts can be me G. A. Webb Regret not that which you have done, |
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mc Member
since 1999-11-16
Posts 67México |
Thoughts are exactly what YOU are, what we all are!!!! they are what we become and are as important as breathing is. very nice!! |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
great write! I love the lines "Thoughts can be you; Thoughts can be me" With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I'm thinking this is a good poem with a nice flow, but these are just my thoughts. Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Great read. Thanks for the read. --Marie It's true that we don't know what we've got until we lose it, but it's also true that we don't know what we've been missing until it arrives. |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
Thank you all. I kinda had fun play'n with these "thoughts"...hehe! G Regret not that which you have done, |
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