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Are You Happy Now |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... 
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Are you happy now that you see me cry? Is it now my turn to wither and die? Did you enjoy watching, as I stumble and fall? Did you dance inside as you watched me crawl? Do you smile as this pain burns? Is this my destiny now to which I return? Are you satisfied? Do you feel clever? Do you really care? Have you ever? ....for Sharon. "I've done all the dumb things"....Paul Kelly [This message has been edited by EagleOne (edited 03-22-2001).] |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
Ouch. Powerful and concise. "When people show you who they are, believe them" |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Eagle *HuGS* Ouch indeed! quick edit for smile. *S* write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Well I guess ouch just about covers it, thanks! And thanks for the spell check Kethry!  "I've done all the dumb things"....Paul Kelly |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I would say that you hope this person does care for you...James |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Somehow angel I knew I would find a heart ripping poem in here...I wish I could take all the pain away, give it wings and leave in it's place sunshine and smiles to fill a lifetime....that's what you deserve my dear friend...so many smiles. Write it...then let it go...**angel winged hugs** & **butterfly kisses** to you sweet one~ |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Eagle One, so sorry you are in pain. Love is a terrible thing and yet a wonderful thing, but it is just a "thing". Many hugs for you. ME |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I doubt she is, or if she is, it won't be forever. Karma reigns even in affairs of the heart. Isis *War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!* |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Wow, this is powerful. I enjoyed reading this one. I like the style... very nice job. --Marie I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am. |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Eddie, what can I say to this sort of pain? "Been there, done that."? Not what you want to hear, I'm sure. How about a hug instead? Take care friend, Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
James ~ Yes I do, and I think she does, in her own way. Thanks for reading. Butterfly ~ As you said my friend, it's all about knowing! I thank you for your thoughts, and the good advice! Take care! ME ~ It is everything you say. Thanks for adding your thoughts, I do appreciate your time, take care! Isis ~ Karma you say….. Well I'm not convinced of that yet but it is certainly an idea that provokes thought. Marie ~ Some powerful feelings I just needed to vent, thanks for stopping by, glad you enjoyed! Dee ~ I thank you friend, I don't think there's much you can say to it, you endure, you survive, you try and move on………………yeah! A hug sounds great, take care! "I've done all the dumb things"....Paul Kelly |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
You know where I am |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
ouch.. i suppose we've all hit the dark a time or two...  hope this moment didnt last too long... hugs, g no i wont be afraid. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Oh, Eddie, this one is just so sad. It oozes pain and hurt. I'm so sorry you feel this way. I'd take it away if I could, my friend. Best wishes to you. ((((hugs)))) All writing comes |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Paula ~ I know, thanks. g ~ when you're out there on the fringe you have these dark moments occasionally, make you appreciate the light a little more. L W ~ It is in the past my friend, I just needed to vent at the time. I know and I thank you, take care! "Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
Hi EagleOne ... What can i say? This sounds all so familiar to me ... (sighs) But I believe there will be someone else out there who would better deserve your affections. I wish you will find that person one day. Hugz ... verve |
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Dark Kisses Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 364Flat lands of Kansas |
Ohhhhhhhhhh this so painful yet so beautiful. I could feel the pain and the heartache as I read. Excellent work!! Mags (and yes it tis I, DKW ) Don't fear your tears! |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
possibly she never did and things like that do hurt, to betrayed bu a loved one but as hard as it is you have to rise above the pain Thanks for sharing and take care. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
emaotional...yet powerfully written...i enjoyed this greatly ...thanks for the read...bye  im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Verve ~ You have said much, thank you! D K ~ Thank you, great to see you again! Brian ~ It can be hard to rise above the pain but when you do the view can be very clear, thanks. Anonymous albert ? ~ and I thank you for reading! "Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our |
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