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Disintegration |
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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon 
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A bag of bones, stumbling through the haze in offbeat reflection, losing what I wanted most. Taken away, one piece at a time, leaving dry husks of skin flaking away from cracked bones. A vulture in the corner mourns his loss; there's nothing left to eat but dust. © 3/19/01 |
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Jellybean King Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 153Jelly, Bean |
All stanzas are great and devestatingly beautiful! The one I loved the most was: "A vulture in the corner mourns his loss; there's nothing left to eat but dust." Jellybean King |
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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon |
Thank you! This was one of my experiments. I just sit back and write whatever pops into my mind. No editing and no thinking. I find that it helps to break writer's block. Thanks again  |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Seems like the block is broken! I liked this, and have actually felt this way. |
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