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Dark Poetry #3

muddled

silentsky
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 114

0 posted 2001-03-16 05:40 AM

a soft cluttering noise is haunting me this afternoon
the thought of flying
( i have offered my brother a years supply of chewing gum if he'll cut off my head with a carving knife.
that way things would be
actions sensations impulses instincts )
my existence would shudder
my body fade
stretching and yearning.
sweet sweet silence.

Swamp¤Faeryie
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since 2000-12-04

Posts 393
fairyland....of course;)

1 posted 2001-03-17 12:45 PM

oooh this was awfuly morbid,but gee i have a weakness for morbid,it was...interesting,and very deep,a deep thought,a deep soul,i liked it.

sammi

much madness is divinest sense,and much sense the starkest madness~Emily Dickinson

Jellybean King
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 153
Jelly, Bean

2 posted 2001-03-18 09:50 AM

Disturbingly beautiful! I liked the idea that, without a head, life would be all "actions sensations impulses instincts".

Jellybean King

ilph
Member

since 2000-07-28

Posts 78

3 posted 2001-03-19 05:37 AM

i think this poem is a gathering for words with no home. they enjoy the company. hope you can to someday.

(ps i feel cryptic)

josh

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