elegy to the dead poem (for EBG)

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Dark Poetry #3

elegy to the dead poem (for EBG)

ma miller
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 806

0 posted 2001-03-13 06:47 PM

searching
in a black hole
for my head
and my soul
i find the ugy beast
once more

don't yell out loud
or call its name --
the attention you get
might be too insane

in whispering voice
the beast will seduce
and say all is right
with the world --
save the noose

but in your mind
you know the truth
suppression and
censors are 'round
on the loose

My calling before me, let quill be my offering;
For to be called poet, no greater gift to receive.

M.A.

family oriented dark poetry?

[This message has been edited by ma miller (edited 03-13-2001).]

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

1 posted 2001-03-14 10:15 AM

interesting pay to present repressed emotions. Nice work.

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

2 posted 2001-03-14 11:00 AM

I did like this one a great deal. *throws darts*
You obviously have quite a talent. I'll go read your other one now.

~Allan

If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

3 posted 2001-03-16 04:11 PM

Hey ma - message heard here. Loud and clear.

Email me if you want to talk.

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