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Last Love |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
I'm going to live this last love That's what I will do I'm going to live this last love To thine heart I'm true I'm going to live this last love I shan't leave you blue I'm going to live this last love 'Cause there's no one like you I'm going to live this last love And take my last chance I'm going to live this last love To feel the romance I'm going to live this last love While we're lost in our dance I'm going to live this last love As we fall in a trance I'm going to live this last love Please don't ask me why I'm going to live this last love With no tears that I'll cry I'm going to live this last love As the time slips on by I'm going to live this last love And then... I will die G. A. WEBB Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't [This message has been edited by G. A. Webb (edited 03-11-2001).] |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
I really liked this one  LOVE ELMO <3 |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
And that is all you can do in these type of situations... And generally speaking we should always live each day like it's our last.. not run out and do stupid crazy things, but cherish the good we do have.... *hugs* Isis *War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
I know exactly what you mean. One should appericate what they have. Great work. Keep it up. Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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Baby G Junior Member
since 2001-01-28
Posts 39Australia |
Lovely poem I really enoyed it! Hopefully we will all be in love until the day we die! |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
Thank you all so much, I'm glad you enjoyed this one. What I meant when I said "And then... I will die" is that the subject in this piece will not be able to take one more painfull scar on his/her heart that love is sure to leave. Therefore, after the love is gone, he/she will die, thus putting a rath dark shade on an otherwise light poem. Dose that make since? Anyways, I hope so, it dose to me. ;-) Thank you all again! G Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Someday someone will come along and you will find the scars arent as important as they used to be...and that her touch heals the pain...dont give up...dont harden your heart...Im not saying you shouldnt be careful...just dont lock your self away and keep love out... |
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