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Dark Poetry #3

s p a c e d o u t ...

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-01-09 02:24 PM

s  p  a  c  e  d     o  u  t ...

(temporary fixes)

t o think that time tongue twisted towards the temporary
e mitting emergence of feelings, felt once before
m inutes that seemed like seconds have glassed over
p erhaps, pushing forward the hours past,  no more.
o nce, believer I, in happy endings,  inventory taking, now at risk
r ifled, doused with warnings that were flammable
a rousing words of desperation, demurely mixed
r edundancy, word-life lies, reflecting ruse
y esterdays tomorrows are never todays

temporary fixes, not forthcoming
s  p  a  c  e  d    o  u  t,  my words once   r a i n b o w e d ...
hide in  g r a y.

~Wynter

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"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 01-09-2001).]

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

1 posted 2001-01-09 06:30 PM

Sad you are hiding in the gray hon. The light and rainbows are much healthier for you.
Love the visual effects here, well done!!
Isis

*The heart of education is the education of the heart...*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.

insect
Senior Member

since 2000-04-22

Posts 1014

2 posted 2001-01-09 10:09 PM

Love how you  s  p a c e d  o u t  the title
Wonderful write!
Your gray will bring rainbows under any skies
that are  s p a c e d  o u t  in blackness!
Love this poem

[This message has been edited by insect (edited 01-09-2001).]

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-01-10 01:12 PM

This was a great one. Loved it!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

fractal007
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 1958

4 posted 2001-01-15 01:28 PM

Like this one. It is very philosophical.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

5 posted 2001-01-15 06:43 PM

Wynter, spaced out, is better than a lot of things, that are not..

Love it.
Sandra

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