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SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19

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Somewhere out there~

0 posted 2003-09-11 02:35 AM

You Call Me Rain

You call me rain and say
Come again some other day
All you do is push me away
Why must I forever pay?

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Lexy
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since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

1 posted 2003-09-11 10:03 AM

Cute title. I think you could expand on theses thoughts though. Very nice Shara!

[This message has been edited by Lexy (09-11-2003 10:04 AM).]

SharaRose
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2 posted 2003-09-11 10:11 AM

Thanks Lexy... Please please please give me some suggestions? I would love it.

SharaRose @-->--

p.s. feel free to email me some suggestions if you'd like.

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

[This message has been edited by SharaRose (09-11-2003 10:13 AM).]

Endlessecho
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since 2003-09-05

Posts 398
I live within myself

3 posted 2003-09-11 12:48 PM

I like this. I think it says it all!

SharaRose
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4 posted 2003-09-11 01:49 PM

Thanks Endlessecho.. I appreciate your thoughts.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2003-09-12 01:58 AM

Shara this reads just fine, but I see a senyru in there
5 - 7 - 5 3 lines
good job
xxoo

SharaRose
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6 posted 2003-09-12 11:13 AM

Thank you littlewings...it's just all I could think to say. I didn't know what else to write. And thanks for the compliment. I would love to learn how to *really* write. So many of you here on this site are far above amazing... you are all fantastic!!!

Bless ya girl,

Shararose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

7 posted 2003-09-12 01:12 PM

Simple and and cool. This is like {of course} a nursery rhyme and yet it still has the deeper feelings of an adult.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

SharaRose
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Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

8 posted 2003-09-12 05:25 PM

Thanks Itchy, I appreciate you reading, and the comment. Nice to see you here again.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Mad_Hatter
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since 2003-06-29

Posts 393
Canada

9 posted 2003-09-12 06:58 PM

Very nicely written, so simple, yet so very effective, amazing...*tips hat*.

SharaRose
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10 posted 2003-09-12 07:01 PM

Thank you Hatter...I appreciate your thoughts. I haven't seen you for a little while. I hope things are well with you.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

11 posted 2003-09-13 09:33 AM

Oh Shara, no, I didnt mean it like that
you do really write . . .
all of us have our own style
is what makes us different
and this site amazing
Just trying to see what you have in there
sorry my mind sometimes does that
I love to try different forms all the time
and different styles
This was perfect
xxoo

SharaRose
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12 posted 2003-09-13 12:11 PM

hehehe No sweetie...I knew what you meant. Believe me you have no worries, because I know what you were saying. You are a sweetie pie, and I know when you speak you mean well!
Most of us know when someone is well meaning. You can usually tell! I've seen enough of ones that aren't to tell the difference.

and more

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

[This message has been edited by SharaRose (09-13-2003 12:14 PM).]

eor
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since 2002-09-26

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blues & greys

13 posted 2003-09-13 07:53 PM

"There never was a genius without a tincture of madness."

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19

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Somewhere out there~

14 posted 2003-09-13 08:32 PM

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Maddy vanD
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since 2003-09-06

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Newfoundland, Canada

15 posted 2003-09-17 10:35 PM

I really like this one, I admire your ability to say so much with so few words....a skill I lack.

Maddy
Poetry is not pretty....poetry is real

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

16 posted 2003-09-17 10:41 PM

Thank you Maddy I am glad you liked. I appreciate your comment. But I have read yours, and they are wonderful!!! Stories that I love to read. Laughs I have gotten when I most needed them are a blessing for me. Thanks for sharing *all* of yours. They are always a delight!!

Shara @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

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