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Dark Poetry #3

Beginning Of Time

cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

0 posted 2003-09-08 11:19 AM

Chaotic explosions cause
widespread havoc.
Tumultuous winds scatter
churning , boiling waters
to far flung points.

Then calm.

Green tendons struggle
through rocky pores.
Minutespecies crawl unsteadily
from beneath giant boulders.

A far distant luminous glow
supplies light and warmth.

Nature embraces
the birth ofthe
beginning of time.

Maddy vanD
Member

since 2003-09-06

Posts 99
Newfoundland, Canada

1 posted 2003-09-08 11:45 PM

This is cool...likely in the wrong forum tho

Maddy
Poetry is not pretty....poetry is real

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

2 posted 2003-09-09 09:10 AM

Maggie, this can be viewed as dark and eerie. I don't think the poem was intended this way. But, when I read it, my feelings were coming from the aftermath of a nuclear holocaust. When taken this way, it was great. I really enjoyed the write.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

3 posted 2003-09-09 01:11 PM

Maddy, thank you for replying but I always post on this forum and think this poem fits in fine. Maggie

cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

4 posted 2003-09-09 01:14 PM

Thank Mysticpoe, I am trying to depict the very start of creation. I have a poem about the aftermath of a nuclear explosion. Maggie

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