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Dark Poetry #3

Disturbing Discovery

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2003-09-03 10:37 PM

the girl wonders
alone into a
escape of her own

through the grave
she walks through
the night she talks

the spirits chill
her to the bone.
the wind whips
at her air.

as she wraps her
arms around tighter
to keep warm she carries
on searching and looking

the ground is hard and
lifeless the grave's are
so filmiluar yet uninviting

she stumbles on the
stones to only low
and behold she see's
her name craved in
the grey stone.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

1 posted 2003-09-04 10:05 AM

Another nice write Foxy. With this one ( and I like the subject matter here ).

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

2 posted 2003-09-04 10:26 PM

Oh Jesus Julie . . .
this is dark beauty
awesome writing
xxoo

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

3 posted 2003-09-05 02:19 AM

Thank you

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

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