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Gavin Junior Member
since 2003-06-22
Posts 47 |
False illusion Perfect sight Blind contusions Bloodied night Soft enraged Calloused tongue Breeding cage Eating sun Childless mother Rising falls Open smother Choking dolls Starving hungry Seeking find Ungodly country Praying blind Formless form Protected dead Spreading swarm Rejected head Loving guillotine Brought asunder Drinking nicotine Pillaged plunder Broken together Headless dream Dieing feathers Quiet screams breaking fingers Tattered rich Escaping lingers staying twitch Ice-ing fire Silenced siren Flying spires Floating island death-a-plenty dreams await loving enemy loving hate |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
I love the irony. This is the true state of things, isn't it. Nicely put. ~Lex  |
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ShadowRaven Member
since 2003-08-13
Posts 51 |
Love it. |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
This is probably my favorite style of poetry. I however, have only managed to write something similar and coherent once. :p This piece was very much enjoyed, well thought-out and wonderfully composed. Well done! |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Reminded me of quickly flashing thru the last 50 years of life in 2 minutes. Real nice. mysticpoe If nothing is something |
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Alnilam Member
since 2003-07-04
Posts 75 |
its kind of beyond the point of nice into this nifty category. i like it alot ~*Alnilam*~ |
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Alnilam Member
since 2003-07-04
Posts 75 |
its beyond nice and into this nifty category, i like it alot |
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sweepea82 New Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 8 |
I find this to be strangely beautiful. |
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