Dark Poetry #3 |
these Women |
mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
born with flowers in her hand, holding she came for tolerance so spread across such lands called much sweetness was her witness and she carried blind as always - they said it was mine so - she followed their waves called mine taken from time as the moments subside her hair crossing asking, should for time or will it last - life’s chimes another day to hold total and sum these Women we know and hold might within their soul no ending, giving and sending like music forever told. If nothing is something |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
mystic . . this is beautiful . . . well done xxoo |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
bravo!! "in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums" |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
p.s. wonder why this had gotten so little attention??? "in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums" |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
I agree eor . . . |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
littlewing, thanks for stopping by, twice. maybe the poem is a bit confusing? Thanks again. mysticpoe, P.S, lw, you write it, I'll read it. eor, my man, thanks again for stopping by, twice also. always can count on you. Looking for another one of your reads!!. Later. mysticpoe If nothing is something then everything is our thoughts and feelings and all that exists. [This message has been edited by mysticpoe (08-25-2003 05:54 PM).] |
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click1 Member
since 2003-03-25
Posts 152usa |
Well Done!! Strong read..I ...uh..WOW!! thanx! Click |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Glad you enjoyed it click, appreciate. mysticpoe If nothing is something |
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