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mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

0 posted 2003-08-24 12:58 PM

born with flowers
in her hand, holding
she came for tolerance
so spread
across such lands
called much

sweetness was her witness
and she carried blind
as always -
they said it was mine

so - she followed
their waves
called mine
taken from time
as the moments subside

her hair
crossing
asking, should
for time
or will it last -
life’s chimes

another day to hold
total and sum
these Women we know
and hold
might within their soul
no ending, giving and sending
like music
forever told.

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

1 posted 2003-08-24 05:09 PM

mystic . . this is beautiful . . .
well done
xxoo

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

2 posted 2003-08-25 01:28 PM

bravo!!

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

3 posted 2003-08-25 01:29 PM

p.s. wonder why this had gotten so little attention???

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

4 posted 2003-08-25 01:58 PM

I agree eor . . .

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

5 posted 2003-08-25 05:52 PM

littlewing, thanks for stopping by, twice. maybe the poem is a bit confusing? Thanks again.

mysticpoe, P.S, lw, you write it, I'll read it.

eor, my man, thanks again for stopping by, twice also. always can count on you. Looking for another one of your reads!!. Later.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

[This message has been edited by mysticpoe (08-25-2003 05:54 PM).]

click1
Member

since 2003-03-25

Posts 152
usa

6 posted 2003-08-25 09:24 PM

Well Done!!
Strong read..I ...uh..WOW!!
thanx!

Click

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

7 posted 2003-08-25 09:55 PM

Glad you enjoyed it click, appreciate.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

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