The Scales and Times of Present Day Dictatorship

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green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2003-08-23 12:48 PM

Effort and a feign
Fake I deffend
A promise uprooted
From the family tree
Consistency

Subsatance thick as syrup
Pretended and floating cloud 9
To the highest glory
False hope and doom
A game of peek-a-boo

Rustic the sword of vengence
And honor melts
With the truth
And the cry of Lady Justice
Failed complaints and tighter control

The rope tightens and power
A flimsy word called law
An oxymoron in pratice
The truth set against the cake
And our judicial branch reaches 320{lbs}

A governmental thumb placed
Seals the blind spot of the body
Signature of the free and the subsequent contract
A slave of the people for the people
Control of our destiny, flattered embers

Tighter the request and vote
Misscalculated one and two
A process of accident must preceed
As we smash our faces
Collasping on our dead roots

Dry and withered
Sentimental machines
Power and the core of evil
Money becomes useless
Democracy and prison a systematic unit

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

1 posted 2003-08-23 01:27 AM

What Itchy? :?

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

[This message has been edited by SharaRose (08-23-2003 01:28 AM).]

blackhalo
Member

since 2000-02-15

Posts 467
Denver, CO

2 posted 2003-08-23 01:42 AM

Ah... Just one question: How in the *edit*WORLD*edit* do you combine politics and poetry so well?!? You made me nod in agreement and think at the same time... Wow. Needless to say, I enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing!
~Alicia

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

3 posted 2003-08-23 03:13 AM

As always, awesome write.. You should try posting in open more often, I could read you there.. and here...and everywhere!

Anyhoot, I love your style. Keep it comin'.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

4 posted 2003-08-23 02:02 PM

Craig, again, very nice thoughts here:

Rustic the sword of vengence
And honor melts
With the truth
And the cry of Lady Justice
Failed complaints and tighter control

I agree with Kaoru, this isnt necessarily dark. You may want to take a twirl in open sometime. Check your spelling too K?
(I know I think I said that last time)
I love your writing and agree with your ideals
xxoo

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

5 posted 2003-08-24 03:09 AM

thanx guys,
i prolly should post in open more often, but everything there goes by so fast that it seems most people dont really get a chance to read your work. And here in dark it usually sticks around a few days. lol

And my spelling is horrible, I need to get a pocket websters.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-08-24 10:23 AM

ahah . . . I have a toolbar for that lol
and yes, open does fly by fast . . .
nice to see you in there though
xxoo

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

7 posted 2003-08-24 12:38 PM

I feel awkward, littlewing. I think my response to your previous response was a lil rude and it wasnt mean to be. If it was, then sorry.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

8 posted 2003-08-24 08:02 PM

I didn't think it was rude at all . . .
you were stating a fact . . . is ok

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