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green_itchy_stuff
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0 posted 2003-08-19 05:46 PM



Im fat and disgusting
Im young and Im nothing
I cant
I quit
And never actually had to

Dirty whore
Try, trial, error
Unjust the spread of my disease

Black ink crap
Fills and holds some rage
Empty out disgusting
I know Im nothing

This is free, this is free
Just a little joke
Stupid and Im young

Completion of a project just about
Memory and memorize
I know this will do
Fast grease disgusting
Minimum and nothing

Ticking hands, work away
Morale hard and pounding
Loser, forgotten destiny?

This collage of me disgusting
Better seen as nothing
Im sorry, young, and dumb
Forever!
Copywritten stone

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

© Copyright 2003 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
eor
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since 2002-09-26
Posts 959
blues & greys
1 posted 2003-08-20 11:26 PM


intense, nice write

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
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2 posted 2003-08-21 12:23 PM


Yeah thanx.  I felt a lil depressed.  
But better now.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
3 posted 2003-08-21 09:00 AM


Intense, indeed.
green_itchy_stuff
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4 posted 2003-08-21 11:41 PM


thats the way it feels every now and then, Kaoru

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

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