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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space 
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ignoble this in slow decay the fear of long since passed only time and a question remains when i draw the final will eyes be closed or open? |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
open...nice write "in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums" |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
that all depends on if they wish to see...  (or maybe one'll be closed and one open, who knows lol.. sorry..) |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
closed........ like from the top of the roller coaster head hanging on the floor, never ever look, just feel it |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Depends on where your'll going. Nice write. mysticpoe If nothing is something |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Oh, you might be shutting them tight, but they'll open on their own . . . *smile* xxoo |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Closed!! It's too scary to keep 'em open!!  I loved this!! ELMO"No man is EVER worth my tears, and the one who is, will never make me cry!" |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks all, these are the things i sit and wonder..whether my eyes will be opened or closed when it happens..shrug [This message has been edited by Aenimal (08-19-2003 02:12 PM).] |
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