Dark Poetry #3 |
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JohnDLeclare Junior Member
since 2000-07-26
Posts 43 |
The Moment Do you Remember me? I can not, Smile today. Or yesterday. I have not, Tomorrow’s hope, Disappears, In the moment, I see, No promise, No visions, Illuminate, My night. My Love, I am sorry, To share, Only Darkness. John D LeClare |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
John, good poem. Why two different poems with the same title? write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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JohnDLeclare Junior Member
since 2000-07-26
Posts 43 |
I forgot to change to "subject" line there fore two "times". It has been a long time since I shared anything. I'm very rusty. Thanks for the comments ![]() John |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
John, A sad moment, but there will be happy ones again. And anyone that loves you has to be willing to accept US as a whole, the good and the bad... Sad stuff but good job ![]() Isis *War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Very powerful with the short lines and stanzas. Enjoyed the read, could feel the emotions running. I love your opening stanza. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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JohnDLeclare Junior Member
since 2000-07-26
Posts 43 |
Thank you for the nice comments. It is nice to be back online again ![]() |
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