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green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2003-08-14 11:59 PM

Honor
Courage
Committed
Sanatarium
Insanity
Psycho hospitality

A feeding disease
Generous and alarm
Extra expell
Rage
Sentiment borne is Hell

Condemn release
Free to do as Im told
Bail

Machines breathing flesh
Chop ego self-esteem
Insomiac contribution
Slave labor constitution
Bills of right set it free

Put forth the extra effort
A nickle and dime
Back to the streets
Prostitute with
And a whore without

Maybe just a lie
Maybe destiny
Made just for me
Proud the few deny

Justice
Peace
Privacy
All in death confide

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

1 posted 2003-08-15 12:25 PM

damn greeny, freaking powerful, this is the best one i have seen from you yet...keep em comming...adding this for sure

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

Dragon Mistress
Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 289
Washington, USA.

2 posted 2003-08-15 01:31 AM

I'm very awe struck. This is very powerful. I enjoyed this immensly!
Tanya

~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

3 posted 2003-08-15 12:12 PM

Thanx eor, I was kinsa mad when i wrote it, so.... I think it showed.

THanx Tanya, when i wrote it i truthfully didnt realize it was a power poem.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

4 posted 2003-08-16 11:58 AM

Yikes, Itchy....watch the blood pressure! Turn on some music, or sing, or go for a walk, or something. Promise? WOW!

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

5 posted 2003-08-16 04:30 PM

Thanx Rose. Actually I do play guitar, so... I guess this just means I have something to write about.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

6 posted 2003-08-17 10:12 PM

Justice
Peace
Privacy
All in death confide

yea,its a real warped world out there,,,stay safe........have some warm milk and cookies and thn hide under the covers................

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

7 posted 2003-08-17 11:12 PM

yeah the world is kinda crazy. Funny the way you put it thought. Made me laugh.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

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