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Dark Poetry #3

I want to tell you...

22NICK22
Member

since 2003-05-29

Posts 54

0 posted 2003-08-13 07:51 PM

I want to tell you
True painting is dead
And burried
In the sands of of the Sahara

I want to tell you
About the people of Venice
Sidewalk queen and godess
You have seen them
Coming and going
Walking and stalking

People in venice
Are stranger than
Those of meger desert life

Cactus tombstone death
Crucified pigeons on the
Telephone wire

Acid queens
Inside an acid dream
Spanish Kings
Nothing in here
Is what is seems

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

1 posted 2003-08-13 09:12 PM

well now. That was spectacular. It was just amazingly worded.

Lil OnE
Member

since 1999-12-14

Posts 234
Pasco County. Fl.

2 posted 2003-08-13 11:14 PM

Crucified pigeons on the telephone wire. That was great!! I loved it.

"No man is EVER worth my tears, and the only one who is will never make me cry"
~Lil OnE!~

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

3 posted 2003-08-13 11:50 PM

...ever read The Gunslinger?

22NICK22
Member

since 2003-05-29

Posts 54

4 posted 2003-08-15 11:23 PM

thanks for your replies, no i havent read the gunslinger

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